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Best Answer The Architect , 02 May 2014 - 01:38 AM

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Chapter 5: The Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse

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#21
Bolt Crank

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No... but there is a surprise...
 
She's still dead though.


Quite obvious because of your "spoiler within a spoiler: surprised spoiler" inside. Also, not to stir the fire pit ablaze, but shouldn't each chapter title have some cameo in the chapter itself? Just a small thought.

I'll just have to wait and see for now.
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#22
The Architect

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Get me 2 more Upvotes, i'll release Chapter 2 ^_^

 

Also, who was the artist guy here?


Edited by The Architect, 01 December 2013 - 10:14 PM.

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#23
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Get me 2 more Upvotes, i'll release Chapter 2 ^_^

 

Also, who was the artist guy here?

.... artist?


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#24
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PeterTehDumb, on 02 Dec 2013 - 06:56, said:
.... artist?

The one who draws?

Wait, i believe it was korbak

how is he contacted?

Edited by The Architect, 02 December 2013 - 12:14 AM.

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#25
Bolt Crank

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The one who draws?


We know what an artist is, but who is this 'artist guy' you are referring too?
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#26
The Architect

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We know what an artist is, but who is this 'artist guy' you are referring too?

 

Wait, i believe it was korbak


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#27
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Jonas Kobak, my russian buddy from my UCPD days


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#28
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Are you talking about Korbak who made that art thread contest and made the Con Artist zombie picture?
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#29
The Architect

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Are you talking about Korbak who made that art thread contest and made the Con Artist zombie picture?

Yeah, that was the guy. I was going to ask him to draw my real protagonist.


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#30
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Yeah, that was the guy. I was going to ask him to draw my real protagonist.


Well, you're just in luck. Seems like he's on right now.
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#31
The Architect

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Yeah, happen to talk but then he went.


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#32
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I'm not sure if my phone is wigging out or something, but...

Are you an Alt. Gabby or are you just using the same profile/avatar picture?
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#33
The Architect

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I'm not sure if my phone is wigging out or something, but...

Are you an Alt. Gabby or are you just using the same profile/avatar picture?

I just changed the name...

 

Also, Korbak took the work. If the spash art is finished, and then the Upvotes is above 5, then i will release the new chapters. They are finished anyways.


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#34
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Ah, him.

I haven't seen him in the forums after he drew a banner for Herp's fanfic. I think I might ask him for a header too.


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#35
Bruce Lee

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I just changed the name...

I suppose I should have known, but then again, I couldn't really tell until I saw your post count.


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#36
The Architect

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Please read the premiere, this is already getting off topic.


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#37
Bolt Crank

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Quickly! Someone give +1 so we can read the next chapter. Oh, the suspense is KILLING me. (pun intended)
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#38
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English is not my first language, but I didn't find this too hard to read. I liked the story. Just the right amount of action and description of people&surroundings for the length of the text. The main character was finely written: she had personality, determination and emotions. Vague hints of her history made her more interesting. The ending fits well to the story.

Some quotes to show what I especially liked in the writing style:

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Looking forward to next chapter.. :)


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#39
The Architect

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English is not my first language, but I didn't find this too hard to read. I liked the story. Just the right amount of action and description of people&surroundings for the length of the text. The main character was finely written: she had personality, determination and emotions. Vague hints of her history made her more interesting. The ending fits well to the story.

Some quotes to show what I especially liked in the writing style:

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Looking forward to next chapter.. :)

"A brief eye-contact briefly frozen her in place, coupled with a scared step back as well."

 

Technically, it's not a repeatition. "Brief eye-contact" explains that the eye contact was brief "as an action", and then "Briefly frozen her in place" meant, briefly frozen her, and it's a "State". 

 

Also, i was just waiting for Korbak's art, since i have 5 upvotes, already that is the only thing needed.


Edited by The Architect, 03 December 2013 - 11:17 PM.

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#40
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Does any one else here is an artist? Korbak says that he doesn't have the time to draw the silhouette art for Chapter 2.


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