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Seres69

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This is my fanfic about The Last Stand: Dead Zone. It is my own interpretation of the story of this game, including parts of The Last Stand: Union City. I may not stick to the official storyline 1:1 but will try my best to keep the actual story alive, sort of.
 

Season 1 Rewritten Chapters

 

Season 1

Spoiler

 

Season 2

Spoiler

 

Season 3:

 

 

Character Stories


Edited by Seres69, 16 September 2018 - 06:17 PM.

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Scrub McLordington LXIX

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Just so you know, the story at the moment is locked, you need to set it to public so that everyone can view it.


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Seres69

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Just so you know, the story at the moment is locked, you need to set it to public so that everyone can view it.

 

Yeah just fixed that, like I said, I´m new to this.


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lolzarz

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Quite an interesting story. Having multiple characters right off the bat made me want to read the sequel; whether the officer would survive. 


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Seres69

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Just added chapter 2. I hope you like and if not, tell me how I could make it better.


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oldgamster

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ok so this reminds me of old t.v. series. cliff hangers every week and 7 days till the next episode! lol

 

good job. the first chapter has a hook strong enough to reel you into the second. I'm looking forward to reading more.


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Mike III

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Yeahh buddiieeeee
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Bolt Crank

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You might want to look over your paragraphing and dialogue format a bit more; paragraphs are fine for now, but you need to separate your dialogue from each other.

http://forum.conarti...l-words/page-47

Take a look at #934 and read through some parts in my story. Use my writing style as an example and then proofread yours to see the difference.

But overall, I enjoyed reading your materials and will await for further chapters.

Edited by Forum Lurker, 19 January 2014 - 10:34 PM.

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Seres69

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You might want to look over your paragraphing and dialogue format a bit more; paragraphs are fine for now, but you need to separate your dialogue from each other.

http://forum.conarti...l-words/page-47

Take a look at #934 and read through some parts in my story. Use my writing style as an example and then proofread yours to see the difference.

But overall, I enjoyed reading your materials and will await for further chapters.

 

Tried to apply that, should be a bit easier to read the dialogue now. Thanks for the tip.


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PeterTehDumb

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Might take some time to read it later, best of luck to your fiction!


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Seres69

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Added chapter 3, this one is more of a background story of how the military entered the city.


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MaxSheen

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great job on your work Seres, hope you can read my stuff when you get around to it :D


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#13
Mike III

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this is awesome so far


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Seres69

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Chapter 4 is up! This one's the longest thus far. Enjoy it.


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Seres69

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Chapter 5 is up. This one is the life of a certain character after it all started.


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Red Leader

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Well, since other people are writing fanfic's too, I decided to give it a shot as well. I'll post several chapters when their done, but for now, only one chapter so you can decide how it turned out. And this is my first ever attempt at something like this, so mistakes WILL be made by me and grammar wise as well.

Chapter 1: https://docs.google....dit?usp=sharing

Chapter 2: https://docs.google....dit?usp=sharing

Chapter 3: https://docs.google....dit?usp=sharing

Chapter 4: https://docs.google....dit?usp=sharing

Update: Well, this fanfic comes along nicely. Seems like I can provide more chapters in a time than I thought I could.

 

Chapter 5: https://docs.google....dit?usp=sharing

Pretty awesome are you making chapter 6?


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Seres69

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Pretty awesome are you making chapter 6?

 

I'm writing when I have time and got it planned out. This will be a full project that will be constantly updated, especially at weekends. A little teaser: Chapter 6 will bring a big turn in events.


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Seres69

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Chapter 6 is up. Sorry if this one seems a bit lame but it's all I could think off.


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Seres69

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Chapter 7 is ready to be read.


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Red Leader

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Chapter 7 is ready to be read.

that was awesome :D


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