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#21
tangytoby

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step one:pay royalties to con

step two:sell to publisher

step three:$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

Theres a book based on runescape, and peter Jackson directing a movie based on halo. lets get on the adapt game wagon.


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#22
Herpderphurrdurr

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step one:pay royalties to con

step two:sell to publisher

step three:$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

Theres a book based on runescape, and peter Jackson directing a movie based on halo. lets get on the adapt game wagon.

 

I'm not that good at writing to start making money off of this. It's just writing for fun and leisure.


Edited by Herpderphurrdurr, 23 May 2013 - 05:31 AM.

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#23
Aya Malevonaire

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Stopped reading on Chapter 5, didn't bother finishing after reading 3 sentences. Format's still the same, style the same. Story is ok, but again I feel like reading a script spreadsheet. Have it your way then.


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#24
Herpderphurrdurr

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Stopped reading on Chapter 5, didn't bother finishing after reading 3 sentences. Format's still the same, style the same. Story is ok, but again I feel like reading a script spreadsheet. Have it your way then.

 

Changing all of the story takes time. Chapter 5 and 6 were written before your critique. I'm also deciding on going forward with the story before I start changing anything.


Edited by Herpderphurrdurr, 25 May 2013 - 03:35 AM.

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#25
ZackMoody

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Sorry to say this, but I stopped reading after a few sentences of Chapter 5, too.

I personally don't mind the script spreadsheet way you write, but the looong paragraphs are just too much.

 

No need to change the story, but do break up the paragraphs when you have a few minutes.

Do let us know if you've done so, and I'll rejoin your army of readers. :) Thanks~


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#26
Herpderphurrdurr

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Edited slightly to make it a little less harsh on the eyes


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#27
Meep

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I personally think they're ok as they are. Just keep writing and I'm not complaining, you've got me hooked now :P


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#28
Herpderphurrdurr

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New chapters, read it while it's hot. Chapter 9 and 10 may be delayed as I am figuring out how to write chapter 10, we'll see how it turns out.


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#29
PeterTehDumb

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I'm gonna read through it to spend my free time, thanks :D +1


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#30
RoxyWyvern

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I really liked chapter 8, your writing style is developing very nicely :)

 

The introduction of Samantha and Donna is great as well, although them almost getting raped got my heart racing. I'm glad that didn't happen! Couldn't help but make a connection between Donna being in Union City for a swimming competition, just like the back story for 4 of my survivors, Australians attending a swimming comp. Perhaps they competed against each other and might have even met each other at some stage! 


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#31
Herpderphurrdurr

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New chapters people, more characters would be introduced soon.


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#32
PeterTehDumb

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Ooh.. now with some intense action.

Keep 'em coming! :D


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#33
tangytoby

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If I could double up vote, I'd double up vote you.


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#34
Herpderphurrdurr

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New chapters, with added action. How will Emma be rescued?


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#35
Korbak

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^_^ 


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#36
Herpderphurrdurr

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^_^

 

*thumbs up*

 

also on another note, I'm posting the next chapters early because I'm moving on the 15th and 16th.


Edited by Herpderphurrdurr, 14 July 2013 - 05:15 AM.

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#37
Korbak

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*thumbs up*

 

also on another note, I'm posting the next chapters early because I'm moving on the 15th and 16th.

was really happy to help you with art for cover, I like talented people, hope you will never stop to write and become famous at someday! 


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#38
Herpderphurrdurr

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was really happy to help you with art for cover, I like talented people, hope you will never stop to write and become famous at someday! 

 

Lol yup I'd like to do this for a living if possible.


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#39
mrsmile14

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im starting to read this.. :D


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#40
Herpderphurrdurr

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I am planning on writing side stories for other characters in the story aside from the main survivors. Depending on the response of the readers I may or may not write them.


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